Ashman's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[TMFE Danna Ditz]

ermm

do not want, her facial expression looks kinda....retarded, and the pose is kinda unnatural, like her leg bent up, it wouldnt bed at the hip like that

also....pixel art? no, goes in illustrations

Spazkid responds:

ahh I see whatchu you mean. Thanks! This type of stuff is what im looking for =P
and shes suppose to look retarded, nothings going for her up in there.

[A Sundae Sit]

mmmmm

om nom nom, binary tool sundae mmmmmmm looks delicious

p.s dont know if binary qualifies as pixel art, id still put it in illustrations

[Fuks @ Strand]

ermm

needs some anatomy practice, bit of work on the background wouldnt hurt either, and a bit more work on the shading

oh yeah, just cause its ms paint doesnt mean its pixel art, this still goes in illustrations

<deleted> responds:

Your message sounds like your avatar looks :b but it's okay and makes sense what you say. Anatomy - I can do better, was rushed. Background - kinda rushed too. Shading - not that many details possible, when you work with limited resolution. My other images will support this opinion.

Besides, it's not MS paint, it's done with Photoshop, just intentionally pixel art. But yes, now where you mention it, it rather counts to illustrations... If I find the changing option, I will make it fit.

[The woman without a face]

hmm

technically its not pixel art because you used blending and opacity and all the painting stuff by the looks of it, i wouldnt even call it finished, all you did was paint the outline of a person, no real details in it

[Heros]

hmm

theyre actually pretty good, could use a little more practice in some places but dont we all, last thing, what on earth made you put this in pixel art lol, its not even digital, should be in illustrations

SteamKid responds:

Opps thanks again for the review

[Angels Gunner]

yeah

best not to use ms paint, its never really any good, and just because its ms paint doesnt mean its pixel art, stick it in illustrations where it belongs

SteamKid responds:

I didnt really know what to file it under. lol

[American Vikings]

no

americans cant be vikings derp, your a viking because of the specific place which i cant remember lol, art itself could use a lot of work, line cleanup, shading would help, and bucketloads of practice

p.s this isnt pixelart, should be in illustrations

[PKMN Best Wishes : New Journey]

ermm

good use of color, linework is a bit wierd though

p.s, this isnt pixel art, this should be in illustrations

ZachsAnomaly responds:

Sorry, kind find anything for oekaki and usually websites group both.

[Asian Sweatshop]

hmm

1 - you didnt color it = points off
2 - the lineart is nothing special = points off

lastly, why the hell is this in pixel art lol, should be in illustrations lol derp

Spazkid responds:

line art is nothing special? what? if I did shade it would look real plain and boring.

[The Tiki Terror]

yes

now this is the one that deserved a fp spot, your definately improving with the art pieces hans so keep it up and keep churning out the art, animation can wait :P