Ashman's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Circle n' Square 3D]

wow

this is a feat of artistic genius, the way you made it look just like the toon but more realistic is amazing :3

Osuka responds:

hahaha thanks, if you have 3d glasses you should give a try how looks XD

[Friday Flood baked bean]

yeah

you got the theme across well, certainly comes across in the piece, but my main tip would be dont shade with black and white, it never comes out well, that and the rest of the pic seems a bit empty, needs something just to take up the space, or make it more interesting

ZaneZansorrow responds:

I gotta remember not to shade like that, thanks. I originally wanted to add a frying pan sizzling under that bean but I never find the time to do it :<

[I DONT WHANT YOUR BEANS]

its good

but the detail is lacking for most of it, while the hand, head and beans are extremely detailed, the rest of the body isnt, and the hand seems too big for the rest of him, but its still really good even though his face looks inhuman, and the b&w and texture takes most of the detail

J-qb responds:

Yeah the texture was meant to take away some of the detail and especially lack thereoff, so im glad that worked ;) I get your point though. The hand is big because its supposed to be closer to the camera thought It would add some movement to the piece.
The head is way too detailed, your right about that. the thing is I started with the head and after that couldnt do everything with the same level of detail. thanks for the rev

[Spoon of Doom]

youve outdone yourself

i think this is probably the best youve done, theres no real criticism i could give apart from adding more detail to the sauce/liquid because right now it looks like slightly orange water, and fixing the steam, its too thin and wispy everything else is good and as iv said, shows definite improvement

Luwano responds:

Thank you for the compliments.

I see that the sauce could use some "thickness" and maybe more red colours... but maybe I just cook my meals with more flimsy sauces. :P

The steam was added during the last steps, I must admit. I didn't know how else to make it look "boiling hot". I even kinda like how the steam almost disappears in front of the light parts of the background. Still, I know it could use some refinement.

Thanks a lot!

[Fetish]

huh

in soviet russia, fish eat pussy

golfinho responds:

in soviet russia, fish eat you

[KILER KLOENS FROM OUT A SPAEC]

LOL

another rucklo piece frontpaged you deserve it :P

Rucklo responds:

TAHNK U I CAN TEL UR 1 OF MYINE BIGG FANNS KEP BEENG KEWL MANG!

[Say Cheese!]

awesome

but wheres darnell and whos the guy in black with the visor? is it a tankman?

Blud-Shot responds:

yep thats tankman

[Thwomp, I choose you!]

hmm

well, you only made thwomp, and it uses 3 colors not 2, i can see them, dont be lazy make your own interface

MarioArt responds:

Obviously, you don't get the point of this piece. It would be stupid to make my own interface 'cause it depicts how it would look like if Thwomp was in Pokémon Crystal. If I would have only showed Thwomp, it would just be Thwomp. The interface adds an extra effect. And it does only use 2 colors. Blue and darker blue. Get your eyes checked.

Less kind regards,
MarioArt

[Attack of the Commie Zombies]

hmm

for a b-movie poster the lack of writing and information is surprising, the picture itself doesnt show much either, just a few zombies at front that change to a grey blob of anonymous lol, its still good, just not for me

idiot-monarch responds:

A lot of zombie posters are of the zombie horde, so I don't really see a problem there. I do agree about the lack of writing though. I should've thought about that t the beginning, since the most well drawn stuff is at the bottom (where the text would look alright).

[Hush]

eurgh

come on dude, put some more effort in, i see nothing more than 10 minute doodles at best here

Whispydriftythings responds:

That's because thats what I did you should really take in to consideration that their are different styles of art and not shoot them down. Be more open.